100 Word challenge week #8




One awesome halloween night we where trick or treating in my friends neighbourhood. I love celebrating halloween its my favorte holoday. The best part is the delicious treats I know thats everyones favorte part! For halloween I was a friendly but brave pirate! My best friend was a flaming flame girl she wore fire hair and a lava cape. She also celebrated halloween so we trick or treated together. We wanted to have a challenge who could have the most candy. And tomorrow the winner gets to pick were to go, the choices where swimming or skating and i picked swimming. But of corse my best friend argued with me! She always gets her way! I knew she was telling a little white lie behind my back too! So  thats the story of the fantastic halloween and the mean friend that always gets her way!

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  1. HillcrestBlog33 November 2017 at 20:09

    Hello Bettafish,
    Avoid repeating words in a short piece of writing like this; you used 'Halloween' five times! You would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling mistakes. Congratulations on completing the 100 Word Challenge Week #8.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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